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    Interjecting

    Interjecting

    You only get what you put into it... and sometimes thats not much
    but the touch i felt was beutiful so ill keep running even if its with a crutch
    thank you for the moments n such, but i don't need you to hold my hand....
    specially since you don't want it, and that i don't seem to understand
    but ill live at large even if you're at grande and we can't stand together
    side by side embracing our issues... cause now you cant feel mine
    and the skys turend grey, and you just seem to fade you with time
    so lets unravel what has been intertwined... or just give me a fucking sign
    so i can continue on my way and hope for a better life line

    i break down and then grow... pheonix rising sometimes slow
    i know some things that other's don't, and sometimes i just dont show
    but i gotta know n' let these fires build up,erect some interjecting thoughts
    brought on by my feind lust or whatever seems to break the crust
    but i know i must so ill try to show and seek what need be
    even if im knee deep ill continue to weep and cry, show joy and glee
    till the rain clears and you're standing with me and a pocketfull of clarity
    but this calamity keeps that from happening so now im asking....

    ....why am i bathing in hatred and tears... i thought we shared our fears?
    but now my peers grow apart and you found a new spark its clear
    and i see my worst fears... you lie to me and tell me im dark
    but ill forever have my own light even if you aint feeding it
    so i hope you enjoyed being in it...
    cause i love every second of bleeding and sucseeding... till you quit


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    Last edited by TwixSin; November 8th, 2005 at 02:40 AM

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    ha ha good wun this piece was nice, you had some steady vocab but on point the whole way thru and your rhymes were nicely put together. You also kept me reading which doesnt happen much in this forum with the blah pieces, keep it up
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    TwixSin
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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnny 6-feet
    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed.
    after class :P

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    ha ha good wun this piece was nice, you had some steady vocab but on point the whole way thru and your rhymes were nicely put together. You also kept me reading which doesnt happen much in this forum with the blah pieces, keep it up..peace

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    TwixSin
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Skribble~
    ha ha good wun this piece was nice, you had some steady vocab but on point the whole way thru and your rhymes were nicely put together. You also kept me reading which doesnt happen much in this forum with the blah pieces, keep it up..peace
    dont be a fag... might as we'll be biting you fake and bake.

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    TwixSin
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    shit

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    its iite..u monkey faced shitbag

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    Quote Originally Posted by Merkaman
    its iite..u monkey faced shitbag
    dope... feed man...

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    it was ight homie i was feelin the vocab and the flow was cool
    good job
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    this was a koo verse...pretty good flow, an the vocab was good, maybe coulda been a lil more, but it was a sic song....keep up the writin....peace
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    up?

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