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Beat: Vinay Beats
Hook: Q
Verses: Q
Mixing: Q
Concept: You lose a job, a loved one, a relationship ends abruptly, or you feel abandoned or alone...This track is an ode to the strong and an encouragement to keep your head up in the face of adversity.
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errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up
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this is sick. flow was ill. there was a little bit of static, just slightly on the hook with the words like "fly' and "high". probably wouldnt of noticed if i was using earphones. cant really say anything else other than that man. this is something id put on my ipod haha.
The whole intro through me off as to what was going on I didn't know if it's voice id's part of the beat or what
1st Vocals could be mixed better with the adlibs part of the rhyming is hard to make out.
Ok delivery basic but consitent on beat cadence
Chorus
Is good melody was good but the tone could be more but it sets a nice vibe
Verse 2
I liked the delivery better a little less basic cadences
Seem to be allot with the beat vocals adlibs and what not going on in the song
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This was pretty dope. You like these types of beats huh? lol. I only ask that cuz I think you would sound a lot doper on different sounder beats than this. At least in my opinion. You went in on this though.
Yessir...i agree...i got different style beats in da works